I know that some people have been having trouble giving feedback on pathbrite so for those of you who have read my essays but can't figure out how to comment on that site, your feedback is welcome here!
Wow! I really like your introduction paragraph, very good and your diction was highly elevated. So essay 1 is very good I would make it a little longer though but overall still a good essay.
Essay 2: "tossed deep into the Dust Bowl" yup I like your use of imagery to convey your points. Very good job and you even brought outside facts. Superb!
I think you did very great on both of your essays. There is a deeper level of thought and I think it made your essays flow very smoothly. I really liked your ideas but I would make them longer. Good job on your syntax and diction though I really enjoyed reading your essays.
Wow! I really like your introduction paragraph, very good and your diction was highly elevated. So essay 1 is very good I would make it a little longer though but overall still a good essay.
ReplyDeleteEssay 2: "tossed deep into the Dust Bowl" yup I like your use of imagery to convey your points. Very good job and you even brought outside facts. Superb!
Great syntax and diction! You presented your points well in a clear and effective way.
ReplyDeleteI think you did very great on both of your essays. There is a deeper level of thought and I think it made your essays flow very smoothly. I really liked your ideas but I would make them longer. Good job on your syntax and diction though I really enjoyed reading your essays.
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